tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post467633664360391012..comments2023-12-23T22:26:22.376-05:00Comments on LuLu's Petals: My first haikuLucyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-81689205197361314432009-07-20T18:26:02.509-04:002009-07-20T18:26:02.509-04:00lucy it's beautiful... especially so the smile...lucy it's beautiful... especially so the smiles on both yr faces...!!one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/07/19/fluttering-butterflies/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-31453722839443388422009-07-19T14:17:54.364-04:002009-07-19T14:17:54.364-04:00You got the syllable count just right! Great haik...You got the syllable count just right! Great haiku :)<br /><br />Love, love, love the pic of you and your son!<br /><br />xx,<br />JP/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-15205173927450527392009-07-18T12:16:09.381-04:002009-07-18T12:16:09.381-04:00Pure loveliness.Pure loveliness.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-36534114214195558512009-07-18T11:18:03.587-04:002009-07-18T11:18:03.587-04:00you're a natural lucy!! and thanks for the bac...you're a natural lucy!! and thanks for the back story on this.. when i first saw the pictures i have to admit i wondered how your son ever agreed to accompany you to a garden!!! lol!!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-75455900082823468872009-07-17T04:04:37.374-04:002009-07-17T04:04:37.374-04:00this is a perfect haiku! loved it!
the imagery and...this is a perfect haiku! loved it!<br />the imagery and message! beautiful...<br /><br /><a href="http://leoimpromptu.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Leo</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-85640691628668168502009-07-15T22:57:51.998-04:002009-07-15T22:57:51.998-04:00A great picture painted with these lines
Love th...A great picture painted with these lines <br /><br />Love the "sulks shifting into smiles" :)Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-57560916864414324582009-07-15T22:00:25.035-04:002009-07-15T22:00:25.035-04:00Perfect! Love the picture, too! I can smell the ro...Perfect! Love the picture, too! I can smell the roses and the 'people' are gorgeous!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-84231136951628442082009-07-15T20:54:51.101-04:002009-07-15T20:54:51.101-04:00I like it, for me, I prefer not to count syllables...I like it, for me, I prefer not to count syllables, haikus are really about a single thought or a single moment, at least I think so -- so I think you did a good joblissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-36615134021564778122009-07-15T19:08:59.808-04:002009-07-15T19:08:59.808-04:00Lovely summer Haiku!Lovely summer Haiku!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-21361115707750544242009-07-15T18:43:36.101-04:002009-07-15T18:43:36.101-04:00Very sweet. I can smell the roses from here. Boys ...Very sweet. I can smell the roses from here. Boys never like to be seen in public with their mom. It is all genetic.2catshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10422139409011064601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-27685757340148057352009-07-15T17:33:30.169-04:002009-07-15T17:33:30.169-04:00words from the heartwords from the heartQueen-Size funny bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14134308455271808356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-26065112548922403802009-07-15T16:40:53.144-04:002009-07-15T16:40:53.144-04:00Hey that's sweet! By the way, I'm back!Hey that's sweet! By the way, I'm back!keithhttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26613104.post-59895849897490233522009-07-15T14:03:17.013-04:002009-07-15T14:03:17.013-04:00i have no idea if it's proper haiku, but, it&#...i have no idea if it's proper haiku, but, it's a great read.quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com