Wednesday, February 04, 2009

Don't mess with Lulu

Crumple
Illicit
Nerve

The Nerve of them! Gall like theirs should be considered illicit comportment!
Boldness! Audacity! Insolence! Alike No one I've ever encountered before!
Asking for favors that totally take advantage of me... feels like harassment!
I will not crumple this time, I'll stand firmly and adamantly announce ..."NO MORE!"!

hope u will visit and consider participating in 3 word wednesday

21 comments:

floreta said...

empowering. short and angry, i like.

Queen-Size funny bone said...

Now put it to work in your everyday life tough girl.

ThomG said...

The strength shows, through and through.

Sepiru Chris said...

I like it! It evokes an angry girl who doesn't really know what she is saying, but knows what circumstance she does not want to find herself in, again.

I especially like how she misuses gall and comportment in their juxtaposition.

Or how she misuses harassment.

It's great; you have completely captured this person, making her stand, words bubbling out in indignation, not half aware of what she is saying.

Brilliant.

Tumblewords: said...

I'm going to make a copy of this and fling it around in everyone's face when I'm annoyed! Could you provide an audio? Just in case, someone can't read?

anthonynorth said...

Go girl!!! :-)

gautami tripathy said...

Atta girl!


illicitly intertwined

M as in Mint said...

Say 'No', say 'No More'! Loved it.


But hey, please dont say no to this...Scary Story :)

Fledgling Poet said...

You told them! Learning to say 'no' is a gift. I really felt your anger and frustration at these people trying to take advantage of you. It was very satisfying to read. :~)

bellamocha said...

I love this Lucy- this 'WOW' really hit me! I love the anger and passion and defiance and strength that this screams- you should stick this on your wall- we all should!

You go for it, Girl!!
Bella :)

Winnie the poohi said...

interesting!

love your template!!

Akelamalu said...

That's telling 'em! LOL

Penny said...

I would definitely like to have the courage to act like that myself sometimes!
PS. I really should get in on these other writing prompts you told me about!

Amarettogirl said...

Hey there lady Lu! - so good to be back around your neck of the cyber-woods! So give me some of that fire - I could have used your 3ww at work yesterday, today and actually I could use it tomorrow too (hahaha) - great post! I haven't seen your site for a while either and what fun stuff is going on around here these days! So glad to be reunited!!!

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Amarettogirl said...

holy crap just call me f***in' itchy finger! I don't know how that glitch happened - feel free to erase this and the repeated comments!

Bone said...

OK. Relax and yell it with me...


SERENITY NOW!!!!!



(And if that doesn't work, try "Hoochie Mama!")

Tammy said...

You go girl! Get um. :) XXOO

forgetfulone said...

Excellent work! I love it!

Patois said...

That was great!