The 3 word wednesday words are: glare luster and threat
I attempted FOUR, Yes 4 haikus..
which one do u like best?
Sensual Luster
in sparkling passionate glare
The threat of true love?
Her lackluster eyes
A glare sharper than a knife
Silent deadly threat
Her threat of revenge
The luster of her silk scarf
his glare choked in awe
your lustrous glare thrills
threatens my skin with Cha Chills
weakens all my wills
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Like the rhythm of this poem
An excellent collection there. And to think, a while ago you didn't think you could write.
Tried to read all the 4 together and also individually.I couldn't find the best amongst these as all were equally powerful.
~Harsha
I also refuse to pick a favorite, since each bring out different feelings, emotions. You are growing stronger into your own voice.
Hey, you are getting a bit clever!
I loved all four, but I especially liked the sinister feel of the second one. Great use of the words in your haikus!
I can't decide between the first two. They're all great, though.
Number 3, without a doubt! love that final line!
Four! Ah, you had to one-up me, didn't you? :-)
I love the first two especially.
I'm farming and you're blossoming into a poet. XXXOOO
I think I like the third one best. Though the last one has that Lucy fun touch to it.
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