Wednesday, August 19, 2009

another haiku

The three word wednesday words are:
decay
graceful
riot



Once Graceful dancer

reflects as old joints decay

Thoughts run riot. heal.



15 comments:

ThomG said...

As a former triathlete facing knee replacement in the future, I can totally relate to this.

anthonynorth said...

Nicely done. You're getting good at these.

Andy Sewina said...

Yeah, you got it just right!

Mark said...

That's perfect. Love it!

Queen-Size funny bone said...

sounds like your a pro.

Americanising Desi said...

and this shot the decay out with grace :)

My Decay of Graceful Riot

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, I love this - can sure identify with the old joints and such... You're a natural at haiku...

2cats said...

This was so beautiful, it took my breath away.

Old Grizz said...

very very good. heal damn knee, heal

Sweetest in the Gale said...

How well put...those old joints get all of us eventually, don't they? It's a hard reality to accept.

Bobbie Sandlin said...

Beautiful, and a wonderful write about aging, and change.

Missy said...

What a poignant Haiku!!! Such reflects must bring both joy and pain.

Just someone said...

That shows the happiness amidst the pain! Nice read!

And, congratulations on the new toy :)

pjd said...

nice use of photos, particularly how they appear to both be directing attention to the words between...

April Lindfors said...

Great haiku, a beautiful bittersweet reflection.