She stared at her reflection. Never had she felt so complete.
She stared at her shoes in the mirror. Able to now view her feet!
She felt the stirring of life inside her. Tears welled up from within
She traced the curve of her swelling miracle. blissfully waiting for life to begin
I wasn't happy with my last' Curve' post..
so I tried again.
thanks SS
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Another great take on Curve ... the swelling curve of new life - wonderful! JP/deb
Good job! This is lovely
lol Lucy! That happened to me too - I wrote a haiku that was okay, so I chose to wait and write some prose that I liked better. :) I read your previous post - it was pretty good!
Your poem is gorgous - you described it just right. :)
Lucy
This is just lovely. I thought of doing something similar on beer bellies!
Nicely done. I was going to say about how I approach it, but Keith got the hang of it before me ;-)
well i am here reading them both at the same time,, and i like this one better too,, not that thee is anything wrong with the other,, but this one is ever so much more "you"....
Yes I love this one Lucy...."swelling miracle" is just what it is! Beautiful my friend!
Hugs Sherrie
Lucy,
I think both carry weight. The first because the lack of inspiration strikes us all and the secret is to just plunge ahead with what comes into our head. The second is what come when the right brain thinks you can do better.
rel
I agree that you are an amazing blogger Lucy! I thought they were both good! XXOO
Nice. When I saw the prompt, I was like you my mind was fragmented, so I just didn't post. Great that you did!
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