Wednesday, May 28, 2008

3 word Wednesday

the 3 words for 3 word wednesday are-
BLURRED
ILLEGAL
MATCH

He lit a match but hesitated before lighting his cigarette.
He was staring hungrily at the Sweet young red head at the corner of the bar.
Appearing Lit herself, illegal no doubt
but that never stopped him before. He inhaled deeply, took one last swig of his
jack Daniel's and boldly strutted towards her.
Suddenly, he was overcome with nausea, blurred vision, intense
head pain. He fell to his knees. An ambulance was called. Time of death was called.
A sweet young brunette sitting quietly alone at a secluded table, intensely
witnessed the dramatic scene with a satisfied smile.
She lit a cigarette, illuminating her recently scarred face, as she shoved the illegal bottle of pills deeper into her purse, and then stealthily exited the club, blurred by the crowd surrounding him. His deranged lust for violence was no match for her methodical lust for revenge.

10 comments:

pia said...

This leaves me wanting to know more about all the characters

paisley said...

a ha,,, the truth finally emerges.... deep inside the heart of our own sweet lucia,, resides the heart of a cold blooded murder mystery writer....

Tammy said...

Lucia, you're a natural! This was really good. xxoo

Redness said...

Ohhh well done!!! How clever you are told have told us such a gripping tale in so few words, excellent, 10/10!

myrtle beached whale said...

I think I saw this episode on CSI Miami recently. I had no idea that you were now writing crime drama. Very good.

TC said...

Wow.

You said so much in a short space! And for some reason, I couldn't help but be cheering for her... and wondering just what had caused her reaction.

one more believer said...

...a most enjoyable story... now why would i say that abt some no good dying... it's all in the way it's written...

Amarettogirl said...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!! I am most certainly becoming a regular to your writing -you are brilliant and a lady behind my own heart!! It would be fun to write a piece together!! I remember way back when you did a post that the rest of us completed and that was SOSOSOSO much fun - but there is something kindred to my soul in this post that makes my feel like a kid in sandbox that wants to play with you!!! YEAHHH!! thanks for this joy ride!!

myrtle beached whale said...
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forgetfulone said...

Oh, Lucia! That'sa wonderful!