Wednesday, September 02, 2009

Haiku frenzy

The 3 word wednesday words are: glare luster and threat
I attempted FOUR, Yes 4 haikus..
which one do u like best?

Sensual Luster
in sparkling passionate glare
The threat of true love?

Her lackluster eyes
A glare sharper than a knife
Silent deadly threat

Her threat of revenge
The luster of her silk scarf
his glare choked in awe

your lustrous glare thrills
threatens my skin with Cha Chills
weakens all my wills


Jeeves said...

Like the rhythm of this poem

anthonynorth said...

An excellent collection there. And to think, a while ago you didn't think you could write.

maglomaniac said...

Tried to read all the 4 together and also individually.I couldn't find the best amongst these as all were equally powerful.


Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

I also refuse to pick a favorite, since each bring out different feelings, emotions. You are growing stronger into your own voice.

keith said...

Hey, you are getting a bit clever!

Sherri B. said...

I loved all four, but I especially liked the sinister feel of the second one. Great use of the words in your haikus!

Forgetfulone said...

I can't decide between the first two. They're all great, though.

Anonymous said...

Number 3, without a doubt! love that final line!

PJD said...

Four! Ah, you had to one-up me, didn't you? :-)

I love the first two especially.

Tammy Brierly said...

I'm farming and you're blossoming into a poet. XXXOOO

Bone said...

I think I like the third one best. Though the last one has that Lucy fun touch to it.